Ch2 18

October 19, 2012

Ch2 20

October 19, 2012

24 Thoughts on Ch2 19

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  1. wahhhhhhhh!!!!…………….. this is making me feel so……….nervous! o///O

    Dont worry, you are not the only one who covers your eyes out of embarrassment!! …me too!!! i´m 21 years old, and i get all flustered whit things even if they are animated!!!! (shame on me)

    I LOVE YOUR COMIC! + I LOVE THE STORY + I LOVE THE ART + I LOVE THE FEELINGS PUT INTO IT = I LOVE YOU!!

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    • Then we can both squeal and be nervous together while covering our faces with our hands and peeking through our fingers!! *( >///<)* I'm you're enjoying the story so far and I don't think anyone's ever left me such a lovingly expressive comment like this Thank you Cris-beta! It brings a happy smile to my face! ^^

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  2. she has three minuets? How about these three:
    “J. S. Bach Minuet in G minor”
    “Bach Minuet in G major”
    “Mozart Minuet in G Major”
    And that’s just the ones in G from just two composers. There’s a lot more, but she has to pick just three, I’d go with these.
    (Yes, I know you meant to write ‘minutes’, but you made me dig these nice little pieces up…)

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    • *ACK* O.o I keep getting those two confused =.= Thank you for pointing that out to me, I can get that page fixed right up. Thank you for taking the time out to find those links. I’ll have to go in and listen to them because I really love classical music ^^

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  3. It scares me how much I relate to this. I like this boy he’s popular tall and soooo cute but I’m afraid to make a move because Im NOT like other girls and he might be obsessed with his image.

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    • I’m happy to know that this is relatable but also worried that it’s coming off as scary ^^; I guess a lot of the things and insecurities that I write about in my comic others go through them as well. I’m definitely realizing more and more how we all aren’t alone in a lot of the problems we go through. If I’m going through something then more than likely there is someone else who has gone through this also ^^

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  4. I like Orianna’s worries; they’re realistic and relatable and we’ve all had them from time to time. It actually makes me sad to see her suddenly get upset about this!

    In terms of characters, I think readers relate to characters who are realistic or have realistic concerns/problems; in the script I’m writing, my main character is a girl of Indian descent living in London with rather relaxed but somewhat traditional family who has an obsession for routine and keeping things normal (it’s a magical story :3). I based her concerns and obsessions on my own personal complusions and a friend of mine relates to my protagonist because of her background (Kinnari, my friend, comes from a relaxed/traditional Indian family and she can relate to my MC and her family-seriously, I wanted to make a family who fought and shouted at each other and basically was overly friendly/trusting and then I found out that I was basically describing Kinnari’s family, which just made me laugh).

    Also, Kinnari is basically my MC’s godmother as she named her (literally just texted her “I NEED AN INDIAN GIRLS NAME”) and now has some creative rights over her and the family (I made her my consultant on Indian culture). Which was a mistake because Kin later asked if my project was like Pocahontas in any way.

    …that kinda kills the whole project but OKAY.

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    • That’s very fortunate that you have a friend who you can go to in order to get consultant on Indian culture =D Research is key when your trying to write about something that you don’t know or haven’t grown up in. I know for those who do historical stories they usually have a lot of research that they have to do if they want to be accurate or at least have it be believable and I think that goes for any story. Research is very important and I’m constantly doing research and using things around me and things that I myself have gone through to further help get my point across in my story.

      Hopefully things don’t get to messy with your project. It can be a bit of a sticky situations when working with friends or family when it comes to a story or business or project. I guess that’s why I do best on my own but I still will ask my sisters or husband a few questions about how a certain page looks or what there thoughts are on a certain subject. So it’s definitely a very sticky situation ^^;

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I might not be able to respond to all comments but I do read and appreciate each one. Thank you for understanding <3